HOw can i write the intro.
I have to write a essay about how i think Egypt was one of the best civilizations ever. My three supporting reasons are Architecture, Writing Sytems, and Religion.The intro just really has to say the three reasons and why i think its superior/bettr than other civilizations.How can i make that to a five -4 sentences paragraph essay?
To right an introductory paragraph, you first need to come up with a thesis statement. A thesis statement is a sentence (usually one of the first in the essay) that states your opinion on the subject and introduces the topic or prompt.
DO NOT put in an intro:
-any of your reasons or evidence (this will make it so that the reader already knows everything about the topic)
-a sentence with “my name is _____ and this is my essay on why Egypt…”
-a sentence with “I plan to persuade you into thinking that Egypt…”
DO include in your intro:
-an opening fact, question, hook, or quote
-a good thesis statement
-SEL elements (Statement, Elaboration, Link back to statement)
-good writing techniques
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In addition to the invitation itself, you will also need to consider the various enclosures that will complete your invitation ensemble. Depending on where your ceremony and reception will be held, you may need to include additional reception details. For example, if you plan an entire weekend of festivities or a destination wedding, you may have travel information to relay. That’s where special enclosures come in. All the “extras” in your invitation envelope should match your invitation in style and formality, completing the all-important first glimpse of your celebration.
Reception Cards
If you are planning a formal celebration, and especially if your ceremony and reception will be held at different locations, you will need to include a separate reception card.
If you feel the hour of your reception makes it unclear whether dinner will be served, it is acceptable to use the phrase “dinner reception” to let guests know that they can expect a meal. If your reception will be held before one o’clock in the afternoon, you should refer to it as a “Breakfast” or a “Brunch.”
It is technically acceptable and does serve your purpose to add the words “and afterwards at the reception” at the bottom of the wedding invitation in lieu of using a reception card, but remember that you are giving up the elegance of a separate reception card. Although it may be tempting to add the information to the
invitation even if you are planning a formal wedding, the cost of reception cards is typically minimal, and including these cards completes the regal look of your entire wedding invitation.
Response Cards
Response cards offer a convenient way for guests to respond to your invitation, and they allow you to keep track of the guest list in order to provide an accurate count to your caterer. It is wise to ask for responses two weeks before the wedding to give your caterer adequate preparation time. There are several options for the wording of the response card, which are shown below and on the following pages.
Although it is best to leave menu information off of your response cards altogether, these cards can include a short list of menu options if absolutely necessary. But remember that caterers are generally able to estimate on their own.
When a guest is completing a response card, all names of those planning to attend the wedding should be noted in the appropriate blanks, including children. If an invitee has received an invitation that includes “and guest” on the inner envelope, then they should write the guest’s name on the response card as well. If the invitation has been extended to a couple but only one person can attend, that should also be noted on the response card.
Even though including response cards is preferred, if circumstances prevent you from including them or you are planning a very small wedding, a reply is requested in a footnote in the lower left-hand corner of the reception card. It may say “The favour of a reply is requested” and should include the host’s complete address. You may instead include “R.S.V.P.” in the lower left-hand corner, which refers to the French phrase “Répondez s’il vous plaît.” There are several ways to write this: R.S.V.P., R.s.v.p. and RSVP are all correct.
If there is no response card, a guest should respond with a formal, handwritten reply, penned on plain paper with blue or black ink.
Response Card Envelopes
Response card envelopes are typically pre-printed with the host’s name and address. Applying a postage stamp to the response card envelopes is a gracious gesture that will assure you of more responses.
Pew Cards
Pew cards are necessary only if you assign certain family members or close friends to specific pews at the ceremony. They may follow the example below or be simple cards with just the words “Pew Number ___” engraved on the front. Guests who have been sent pew cards should present them to the ushers upon entering the ceremony. If you have sent pew cards to grandparents or godparents and wish to have specific ushers seat them (such as a brother or cousin), make sure your wedding director is aware of the situation.
Map, Directions, and Accommodations Cards
If you feel the need to include map, directions, or accommodations cards for your guests, keep these pieces in the same style and formality as your other enclosures. Be sure the directions are accurate and that the font you use is easy to read. List all pertinent information on the accommodations card, such as hotel name, address, and telephone number.
Tim Kilroy is a writer living in Boston who thinks that wedding invitations are the finest use of postage stamps.
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I am writing this little introduction, but I don’t know if it sounds good as English or not . please revise it to me if you see anything wrong with it .
here is the introduction :
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The point of this website is to bring a dream of Sudan being united into the reality. It’s every Sudanese dream and rights to enjoy living in a peace all over Sudan, and feel the unity of Sudan as United people, regardless to their differences in religions, colors, cultures and languages; and regardless to all their differences if we get united; Sudan can be consider as one of the best examples and complete picture of how true and real peace could be. In order to do so, we have to overcome our problems and find solutions to it by agreeing on everything sincerely.
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The point of this website is to make the dream of uniting Sudan into a reality. It’s every Sudanese citizen’s dream and God-given right to enjoy a life of peace all throughout their native land. It is their right to experience the unity of Sudan, regardless of differences in religion, race, culture, and language. If the Sudanese can unite as a people, Sudan can then be considered one of the best examples of how living in peace can indeed be possible. In order to do so, the Sudanese have to overcome their conflicts and find useful solutions by coming to a peaceful agreement in all matters.
I’ve offered to re-write a company’s email newsletter.
(a social-dance club)
When you get an email newsletter, what kind of information would make you want to read it?
Are you looking for interesting stores or trivia?
Sales- promotions?
Updates on the business’s activities?
The newsletter comes out every month and currently it’s basically asking members to bring in new members, unless there’s a time/location change. Zzzzzz Very little of value
What would make you want to read a newsletter?
How can I make it interesting?
Well, considering the company (a social dance club), I think your best best is something that is eye catching. Colorful graphics, font, and a few photos. As far as actual content, updates and activities for future events, introductions of new members and maybe even a section on club tunes of the month might be your best bet.
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All of the sample invitations say “Mr. and Mrs. Smith request the honor of your attendance at the wedding of their daughter Suzy to James at……”
My dad is deceased, never knew him. and my mom is not financially contributing to the wedding in any way, neither are his parents..
So would it be appropriate to put “Suzy and James would like to request the honor of your attendance of their wedding on….” or something along those lines? No, my name isn’t Suzy lol It’s just an example.
My mom says she’s “hurt” that I don’t want to include her name or his parents names on the invitation. If they were paying for the wedding, or at least helping somehow then sure, we would add it. But we’re paying for eeeeverrrryyyythiiiinnngg.
My mom makes 6 figures a year.. she can afford to help, but she doesn’t want to.. If I ever wanted anything I had to pay for it myself- the extras in life, a car, trips, etc.. so I did. She’s just that way.
You include both sets of parents’ names – this has NOTHING to do with who is paying for the wedding. You do it out of respect, to show which families you are from.
Many couples pay for their own weddings, but still honour their parents properly.
Susan Linda,
daughter of Katherine and the late Peter Smith,
and
Mark William,
son of Gordon and Helen Brown,
request the honour of your presence…..
What is the different Shortcomings vs. weaknesses? Please give examples.?
I am writing a self-evaluation paper for my internship and we have to write our strengths, weaknesses, shortcomings, and future career interests. Can someone please give me an example of shortcomings and how they differ from weakness? Thank you.
A shortcoming is the inability to reach a certain level or goal. Like you can really try hard and never really be an A student in math. You simply do not have the ability to do it as easily as someone else. Thats a shortcoming. A weakness in its simplest term is the inability to be strong. If you simply cannot resist the temptation to eat ice cream when you know its in that freezer, thats a weakness.
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I’m not a game designer and I’m not an artist. In time I will go to school for programming and game design. I started to write my own RPG script. The way I’ve started writing it is when a scene happens I put it in [ ] brackets and I explain what’s happening and what everything looks like. Then I write the text for the words that are said. Well basically you’d be able to understand it if you were going to make it into a game.
How can I get it across to maybe a game company that would like to do a deal if I write a good enough script?
Game companies do not hire based on unsolicited scripts. They will throw it in the bin and not even read it. Seriously.
If you want to get the attention of an actual company, you need to either wait until they’re *advertising* for a job (Bioware does writer-calls sometimes, and their applications have specific rules about what sort of writing to submit) OR you need to write your own stuff and build up a reputation and a portfolio. If you’re the author of a successful game, they’re a lot more likely to pay attention to you.
There are tools out there for writers who aren’t so good at code/art to work with. Try RPG Maker. There’s a big community of people who will help you get started. Many people make good money selling RPG Maker games.
What is a good outline for a biology research paper on the CONTROVERSIES of abortion?
Some thing that is good enough to write like 8 pages on. im seriously confused on how to plan it out….. i just really dont know how to break it up into paragraphs and stuff… i kinda wanna know like what to talk about in each paragraph
thanks :]
For a leading edge subject on abortion, I suggest you try this page: http://blog.360.yahoo.com/blog-2TjBrmQlabMmkPXFrSmHjB_fBgzsyDOJmsQ-?cq=1&p=1
And a link to this page is handy also: http://www.prolifeismurder.com
The first page gives information that was unavailable before Rov V Wade and pretty much settles the issue of abortion as it relates to the issue of conception. The page brings out the fact that there is a 7 in 10 chance that if a woman conceives then the fetus will die. The web page makes the connection between the choice to have sex and the resulting natural abortion. The point is that a choice to have sex is a choice to risk abortion. The logical conclusion is that if a person is pro life, they cannot have sex. In fact even sex for the purpose of procreation will lead to abortion. I think you can do an easy 8 pages using this page as a template.